juan travis (son of the gods) (athens 22)		2012-01-11	id # 607
ok i will make a moa fanfic

athens22		2012-01-11	id # 609
hey man i cant publish a story on fanfiction.net until 1-13-12

athens22		2012-03-01	id # 624
this is soooooooooooooo stupid like seriously Luke doesn't have the power to shape shift and only Hecate could give him that power and she wold never side with anyone but the gods

Sloppy Joe 313		2012-03-01	id # 626
This chapter was really funny except I'm not sure I like the Pothena.

Sloppy Joe 313		2012-03-02	id # 627
Uh oh.... How will Percy make his big comeback? Lots of suspense and you made Luke really evil but ya did good ;)

juan travis		2012-03-02	id # 630
why seriously why u just going to do that erase chapters 7 and 8 and start over make it to where Percy and Annabeth are kidnapped by Luke from there Kronos finds and kidnaps there kids brings the kid 2 percy and annabeth tie the kids up and hide then family away so that they cant intervene but on the 25 chapter have them escape and that is the last chapter so 4 the cliff hanger have them on a cliff ledge watching the final battle and then make a 5 one and make it all about the final battle and a few hours after the final battle! or i will send elmo to eat your brains

juan travis		2012-03-02	id # 631
oh and Sloppy Joe don't make me send Elmo 2 you're house wait never mind i'll come in stead and make sure u have a slow torturous death!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!